If you want to read some more, and better poetry, Diane - who has taken over the hosting of this challenge - and Mimi of
Messymimi's Meanderings - who also supplies us with topics - are writing wonderful, funny,
thought-provoking, ingenious and honestly well written verse. Go and
read.
Karen of Baking in a Tornado has joined us in this crazy pursuit, and promises us at least a poem a month - may we hope for more!
SpikesBestMate often leaves a nice verse in the comments over at Diane's place.
Jenny at Procrastinating Donkey who has been a faithful participant, is slowly returning to blogging after her husband's passing from this world. Let's continue to send warm thoughts, good energy, and lots of prayers her way. And dare we hope that she will join Poetry Monday again.
Karen of Baking in a Tornado has joined us in this crazy pursuit, and promises us at least a poem a month - may we hope for more!
SpikesBestMate often leaves a nice verse in the comments over at Diane's place.
Jenny at Procrastinating Donkey who has been a faithful participant, is slowly returning to blogging after her husband's passing from this world. Let's continue to send warm thoughts, good energy, and lots of prayers her way. And dare we hope that she will join Poetry Monday again.
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This Mondays topic is Wind. In Danish we have a children's song about us not being able to see the wind, only what it does. I tried re-writing it in English.
Nobody can ever see the wind.
You can't see it, neither can your friend
But... when the mills are turning
And the leaves are churning
Everybody knows the wind is blowing.
Nobody can ever see the wind
Nobody can even get a glint.
But ... when the waves are foamy
And the sea is stormy
Everybody knows the wind is blowing.
Nobody can ever see the wind
No matter where you are or were or been.
But ... when the eaves are sighing
And the pennants flying,
Everybody knows the wind is blowing.
Nobody can ever see the wind
Noone can, not even your best friend
but when kites are flying
and the clothes are drying
Everybody knows the wind is blowing.
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Upcoming topics:
Monsters (August 30)
Shoes (September 6) From Mimi
Defy Superstition Day (September 13) Also from Mimi
Remembering 8-Tracks (September 20) Another from Mimi
That's lovely! It's true, the wind blows where it wants, and we do not see it, only what it does for us.
SvarSletI love this.
SvarSletAnd it is true. Invisible - but so very powerful.
What's so interesting about this poem is the point that there are all kinds of actions, including those of humans, that though not seen can create ripples that affect us.
SvarSletLooking forward to join you for "Shoes" poems on September 6th.
This is fantastic, Charlotte! I love it!
SvarSletAn excellent poem. I love the wind.
SvarSlet